I like the ornament on the cloth next to her arm, the string of shining pearls and the star on it and the folds of the cloth around her lower breasts and down, as well as the collar. Good way of indicating the left breast there, by the way. And the black looks great on her when worn like this. I also really like stars in her hair and the exact way which it hangs from her front and goes down her back, with good shading to indicate depth behind her head. I love the ears and the sunset-like scene in the background. What I don't like is the positioning of the eyes over the hair—it looks off when it is this prominent—as well as the smaller size they have here. If going for a human face, it'd be better to make the space between her eyes equal to roughly one eye-width. Here it's at least two. Enlarging them would solve the issue, but would also require some work that might be too much for the picture as is.
asldkfdlk;hgksdjklasdjfklasdfkashdfjkljekljfiosdehiogioj Your coloring makes me so dang jealous. Good mercy this came out looking beautiful. Seriously, the one day I don't watch you stream and you turn out this piece of gorgeousness.